The links below provide information for the research project you will be completing for this course.
A central part of earning a master's degree is demonstrating the ability to conduct research and to analyze real-world phenomena. The value of doing research and analysis is not limited to academia; these are skills that have immense practical value in both personal and professional spheres, especially within the fields of intelligence and human security, where analysis is the heart of the work. It takes training and practice to learn and refine research and analysis skills. This is why the successful completion of a well-written and well-documented research project is one of the requirements to pass GEOG 571. This research project is worth 230 points total.
We want to make an important distinction between research projects and reports.
A report is a project where a student chooses a topic, consults relevant sources from which they collect and collate facts about that topic, composes a carefully organized summary or discussion of those facts, and delivers all of this as a paper or presentation.
By contrast, a research project is a project in which a student formulates a central question, consults relevant sources from which they collect and collate information (which can include basic facts, quantitative data, and qualitative data) relating to that question, analyzes and interprets the information they have found, and develops a defensible argument that supports their interpretation. The argument is usually presented in its most basic form as a thesis statement, which appears in the introduction to the completed project, and the completed project is often delivered as a paper or presentation.
Reports and research projects have some things in common: they require a student to identify a question or topic worthy of study; identify, vet, and consult a number and variety of relevant sources; synthesize information from those sources; and compose some kind of deliverable that presents their work. Yet there are a couple of crucial differences that we want to highlight here.
First, while a report centers on a topic, a research project centers on a question. Second, while a report presents a synthesis of information on its topic, a research project makes an argument based on the researcher’s analysis of the information. Both a report and a research project can be a lot of work — but the difference in approach up front (i.e., choosing a question rather than a topic) means that a research project entails a level of critical thinking and analytical skills that a report does not.
Ultimately, where a report simply presents existing knowledge, the goal of a research project is to present new knowledge (or a new interpretation) about something. This is what makes research projects common requirements of graduate-level courses — including this one.
Research projects are traditionally delivered as research papers. Yet we now have technology that enables us to present research effectively across a variety of media. For this course, you may choose one of the following options for presenting your research:
You may also suggest another medium. If you choose to present your project in a medium other than a research paper, please make sure to discuss your vision with your instructor.
Make sure that you choose a medium that is appropriate to your project. Certain kinds of projects lend themselves better to some formats than others. If your evidence is best presented in a set of interactive maps, or if your project includes lots of visuals (still or video), StoryMaps is a good option. If your project revolves around interviews that you are conducting, or if there is a significant audio component, a podcast might be appropriate. If your project is purely or primarily text-driven (possibly with a map or table or two), you should present it as a traditional research paper.
Regardless of the medium, the research project must result in the equivalent of 12 to 15 pages of text (not including title, reference, graphics, or figures). Note that for podcasts, this translates to 20 to 30 minutes of airtime. The project must also be documented with the APA citation guidelines [1]. Please visit the Penn State University Libraries APA Quick Citation Guide to make sure you are using the proper citations.
Note for students submitting podcasts: your podcast must be accompanied by two things:
Reminder: you are expected to incorporate citations in the podcast itself (e.g., by conversationally stating the author and year of a study). If you are not sure how best to do this, contact your instructor.
If you choose to present your project as a paper, it must use these formatting guidelines:
The key to completing a successful research project is identifying and constructing a good research question. For a research question to be good, it needs to fulfill some basic criteria (the following bullet points come from the George Mason University Writing Center website):
All of these points are important for generating a good research question. Given that this is a graduate level course, we want to emphasize the last two points here. The topics and concepts that we use in this course are complex, and your research is meant to generate new knowledge or a new interpretation of existing knowledge. Be mindful of this as you generate your research question. If you can answer your research question with an unqualified “yes” or “no” after a few minutes’ research, or if your sources provide you with a clear-cut answer to your question, it means that your question is not deep enough to merit a research project.
Your research project should sit at the nexus of cultural/political geography and intelligence or human security. That is, your project should consider an issue related to intelligence or human security from a geographical perspective. We encourage you to develop your primary research question around your professional interests; we expect you to take a geographical approach to answering that question.
Your research project should be focused on one or more specific places or regions within the world, and on a specific issue with respect to intelligence or human security. Below are some examples of general research questions that you can use as a starting point to build a more specific question tailored to your interests:
Remember: the questions above are meant to get you thinking. Many of the questions posed above are far too broad for you to conduct a research project within the scope of this assignment. You will likely need to hone one of these questions to focus on a more specific question. Note that many of these could be designed to focus on a single place, or to present two or more case studies in comparison. Bear in mind that any research question that you propose should be as specific as possible with regard to place or region, actors, conflict, and other relevant factors.
To help you understand what we mean by “specific,” here are some examples of research questions around which students in other terms have based their research projects:
A good project will incorporate at least 16-20 vetted sources. These should be primarily scholarly sources, though some projects will also rely on gray literature. Projects that use GIS data should list all data sources in their works cited, but only two of these will count toward the source minimum. Students should not use Britannica, Wikipedia, or other general tertiary sources (though it is okay to use specialized encyclopedias such as the Dictionary of Human Geography). See below for more information.
Projects will be graded on strength and sophistication of analysis, clarity of presentation, logic, reliance on accurate information and facts, integration of reading materials (including online lectures), and attention to detail. The grading rubric is provided in the assignment dropbox.
The grade will not be based upon the position taken relative to the issue, but instead will rest upon the accuracy and effectiveness of applying geographic thought. Simply arguing that you "feel" a certain way about something is not a reasonable defense of your position. Instead, you will need to cite relevant sources to support your assertions, with the majority of these sources being scholarly sources. The following video from the University of South Australia describes which sources are considered scholarly.
Used with permission from "Intelligence and Crime Analysis: Critical Thinking through Writing," (2012) p. 18.
Writing is thinking on paper. When you write you give the reader a glimpse of your thinking abilities-you are saying something about yourself. Like it or not, people form images about you based on how you write. If there are a number of spelling or grammar mistakes what are you saying about yourself-that you are careless, not well educated, lack pride? Writing can be easy if you will remember a few simple rules:
Rule One:
Think before you write. Know what you want to say before you put pen to paper or fingers to keyboard.
Rule Two:
Organize your thoughts. If you are writing a longer paper or memorandum, take time to organize your thought so you can present a logical argument.
Rule Three:
Use simple sentences wherever possible-in the active voice.
Rule Four:
Pick your words carefully. Use shorter English words based on the Anglo-Saxon roots of the language. Usually these words are clear and void of nuance and innuendo.
Rule Five:
Pursue economy of language. Make each word count and use familiar terms.
Rule Six:
Make the majority of your sentences short and to the point.
Rule Seven:
Self-edit and proofread.
The Intelligence Style is expository writing. It is plain talk, straightforward and matter-of-fact communication. Expository writing efficiently conveys ideas, requires precision, and stresses clarity. A major goal of expository writing is to never make the reader wonder what the main point is in the paper or paragraph. Expository writing emphasizes the use of the active voice, although the passive voice is not wrong and should be used at times in your writing.
Used with permission from "Intelligence and Crime Analysis: Critical Thinking through Writing," (2012) pp. 87-88.
Used with permission from "Intelligence and Crime Analysis: Critical Thinking through Writing," (2012) p. 41.
Six mistakes are common to all new intelligence analysts, mistakes that must be corrected to have a career in intelligence analysis:
Note: This rubric is also available in Canvas in the Lesson 9 module where you will submit your final draft.
Criteria | Ratings | Points | ||||
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Geospatial insight Geographic thought is included leading to significant and unique insights with respect to the evidence, analysis, and synthesis. |
Exemplary (20 pts) The project addresses a phenomenon that is clearly geographic and presents a strong geospatial analysis of a human security issue. The project expertly applies theoretical concepts from the course in its analysis. The reader gains new insights through clearly defined analysis. |
Proficient (15 pts) The project addresses a phenomenon that is nominally geographic and presents an adequate geospatial analysis of a human security issue. The project adequately applies theoretical concepts from the course in its analysis. |
Marginal (10 pts) The project addresses a phenomenon that is not clearly geographic and/or presents a basic geospatial analysis of a human security issue. The project applies theoretical concepts from the course in its analysis, but those concepts may be incorrectly used. |
Unacceptable (5 pts) The project addresses a phenomenon that is not geographic and/or presents an analysis of a human security issue that does not use a geospatial perspective. The project does not apply theoretical concepts from the course in its analysis. |
Missing (0 pts) Not submitted. |
20 pts |
Citations Reliance on accurate information and facts: Reliable sources cited in addition to course material. Properly gives credit to other researchers and acknowledges their ideas. |
Exemplary (20 pts) Research depth exceeds expectations. Correctly acknowledges and documents sources in APA style in text citations and works cited pages. |
Proficient (15 pts) Sufficient information provided to support topics. Correctly acknowledges and documents sources in APA style in-text citations and works cited pages. |
Marginal (10 pts) Incorrectly or partially acknowledges and documents sources in APA style in-text citations and works cited pages. Although occasional references are provided, the writer relies on unsubstantiated statements. |
Unacceptable (5 pts) Fails to acknowledges and document sources in APA style in-text citations and works cited pages. Writer relies on unsubstantiated statements. The reader is confused about the source of ideas. |
Missing (0 pts) Not submitted. |
20 pts |
Style Clarity of thought and presentation: Structure of paragraphs clear and easy to follow. Flow of ideas fluid and logical. Organization transparent, logical, and helpful. A pleasure to read. |
Exemplary (20 pts) The project is well organized and unified with ideas and sentences that relate to the main topic. The ideas are arranged logically to support the thesis. Uses appropriate, direct language: the writing is compelling; the sentences are well phrased and varied in length and structure. Paragraphs are well-structured, excellent use of headings, organization and flow. |
Proficient (15 pts) The ideas are arranged logically to support the thesis. Paragraphs are well-structured, excellent use of headings, organization and flow. The sentences are well-phrased and varied in length and structure. There are occasional violations in the writing, but they do not represent a major distraction or obscure meaning. |
Marginal (10 pts) Has partial or inadequate introduction and conclusion The writing is not organized logically. Ideas fail to make sense and are not expressed clearly. Some sentences are awkwardly constructed, and represent an occasional distraction for the reader. Paragraphs are unstructured, lacks general organization, and flow. |
Unacceptable (5 pts) The project has an inadequate introduction and conclusion. The writing is not arranged logically. Frequently, ideas fail to make sense and are not expressed clearly. Reader cannot identify a line of reasoning. Errors in sentence structure represent a major distraction to the reader. Paragraphs are unstructured, headings are missing, lacks general organization and flow. |
Missing (0 pts) Not submitted. |
20 pts |
Mechanics Consistent and appropriate voice. Sophisticated and precise word choice. Almost no spelling errors, errors in agreement, tense, punctuation or capitalization. |
Exemplary (20 pts) Free of errors in grammar, punctuation, word choice, spelling, and format. |
Proficient (15 pts) Few minimal errors in grammar, punctuation, word choice, spelling and format. |
Marginal (10 pts) Writing has numerous errors in grammar, punctuation, word choice, spelling, and format and distracts the reader. |
Unacceptable (5 pts) Errors in grammar, punctuation, word choice, spelling, and format are so numerous that they obscure the meaning of the passage. The reader is confused and stops reading. |
Missing (0 pts) Not submitted. |
20 pts |
Incorporated Feedback | Exemplary (20 pts) Final draft thoroughly incorporates professor's feedback from the rough draft, answering questions, fleshing out details, adding citations, etc. where appropriate. |
Proficient (15 pts) Final draft incorporates most of the professor's feedback from the rough draft, answering questions, fleshing out details, adding citations, etc. where appropriate. |
Marginal (10 pts) Final draft incorporates some of the professor's feedback from the rough draft, answering questions, fleshing out details, adding citations, etc. where appropriate. |
Unacceptable (5 pts) Final draft incorporates a little of the professor's feedback from the rough draft, answering questions, fleshing out details, adding citations, etc. where appropriate. |
Missing (0 pts) Missing, no submission, or final draft incorporates none of the professor's feedback from the rough draft. |
20 pts |
Number of Sources | Exemplary (10 pts) Research project has 16 or more sources. |
Proficient (8 pts) Research project has 11-15 sources. |
Marginal (6 pts) Research project has 6-10 sources. |
Unacceptable (4 pts) Research project has 1-5 sources. |
Missing (0 pts) Missing, no submission, or research project has 0 sources. |
10 pts |
Argument | Exemplary (20 pts) Project makes an original, logically consistent, coherent argument. The argument is succinctly captured by a clear thesis statement. The thesis statement answers the research question proposed by the project. The project provides compelling supporting arguments, evidence, examples and details. |
Proficient (15 pts) Project makes a logically consistent argument that is expressed in a thesis statement. The thesis statement generally answers the research question. The argument shows some original elements, and/or the thesis statement is verbose. The project provides adequate supporting arguments, evidence, examples and details. |
Marginal (10 pts) Project makes an argument that is expressed in a thesis statement. The argument is awkwardly constructed, and/or the thesis statement is unclear, and/or the thesis statement does not adequately answer the question proposed by the project. The project does not provide adequate supporting arguments, evidence, examples or details. |
Unacceptable (5 pts) Project makes an argument, but the argument is unoriginal, unclear, or poorly constructed. The thesis statement is either unclear or lacking, and/or does not answer the research question proposed by the project. The project does not provide adequate supporting arguments, evidence, examples or details. |
Missing (0 pts) Not submitted. |
20 pts |
Total Points: 130 |
Links
[1] http://guides.libraries.psu.edu/apaquickguide
[2] https://www.getwelder.com/transcribe-old#:~:text=Welder's%20free%20video%20transcription%20allows,txt%20format.
[3] https://www.e-education.psu.edu/geog571/node/476
[4] https://www.e-education.psu.edu/geog571/node/507
[5] https://www.e-education.psu.edu/geog571/node/487
[6] https://www.e-education.psu.edu/geog571/node/493
[7] https://www.e-education.psu.edu/geog571/node/503